UH SOMETHING BROKE HANG ON
Started by Zovistograt, March 17, 2008, 12:27:07 PM
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Quote<+Mithos> My mom grounded me for being gay.
Quote from: Kazooie-Banjo on March 17, 2008, 10:15:59 PMVery interesting. It needs some work, but you've got a great start on something rather promising.First of all, let me say that it needs a better beginning. You immediately thrust us into the tune that carries out through almost the entire song. You need an intro.Now, listening to the part you start us out with gets a bit tiring, unfortunately. It's a bit stale until it picks up at about 1:10 or so. Then it gets undeniably better. Ew at the waving out effects at 1:46. After those effects, the only problem I really have is the low quality the song seems to have because of how overwhelmingly "thick" you make the piece sound with the obnoxious bass or whatever that distorted stuff is. Lastly, the outro is too long. That outro might actually serve better as an intro, when shortened.
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