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Title: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 27, 2010, 05:54:40 PM
What is a man when all choose is taken from him? What is life without rights? What would you do if everything that ever meant something was taken?

Drazgon is a dangerous place. Within the deadly mountains to the north, the raging sea to the east, the ferocious planes to the south, there lays a country to the west. The kingdom is called 'Raz' and is the last human foothold on Drazgon.

But all is not peaceful in Drazgon. The government has issued a Civil Control, where the population is watched. Nothing is done without their consent. They call themselves 'The Pristine'. Without them, the populous fears, they wouldn't last more than a week.

There are many fractions that are after The Pristine. One big one is 'Knaughty'. This is one of the most dangerous, and more of a gang than a resistance.

Another, Preven, seeks to gain independency from this system through diplomatic means. But they aren't afraid to muscle for things they want.

And the final big one is Omex. They have gone as far to leave the city and make a life in the mountains. The Pristine tries to govern them, but with little luck. You don't hear much about them, but people have come to fear them as much as the creatures that inhabit the Wildlands.

That is where the big problem is. The thing that keeps everyone in check. Fear. In the Wildlands, there are monsters no one has ever lived to talk about. One that fears most people are the shape shifters, with the ability to imitate us. No one has seen a shape shifters true form and lived, except the leader of The Pristine, who made an escape from one. A close second is the Mind Flayers, a monster with a squid like head that can control any sentient life.

But the true terror comes from Dragon, which Drazgon was named after. These all-powerful beings could wipe out humanity in an instant, but instead decide to play with us. They are capable of bestowing amazing abilities onto anyone who is deems worthy. These people are called 'Tainted'. Within them flows the power of Dragons. Many commit suicide the moment it happens, but other use this power. It is unknown what happens, or if there is any side-effects beside power. Unlimited power.

There is a constant search for Tainted, and I, Fral, lead them. The Cleanse is a group from The Pristine that searches and kills and Tainted. Right now, I am closing in on one of them. But this is just the prologue to this story, in which not even I am the main player. Will you join me on the quest of your life?


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Alright, this is a simple RP I made mostly to hold time until The Bird is able to be on more. Simply story crap. Blah Blah Blah, governments are ninnyes. You're gonna have to join something also. Whether is be The Prestine or Resistence, or maybe even sit on the sidelines. It's all up to you. Onto character sheets.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Fraction: (The Pristine, Knaughty, Omex, Preven, Other)
Main Weapon:
Background:
Other:

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This can start once we get a few people. I won't be doing anything special until everyone gets comfortable, so have fun.  :D
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 27, 2010, 06:05:42 PM
Magnum
[spoiler]Name: Fral Ingen
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Appearance: [spoiler](http://www.queeniechan.com/images/gallery/artwork/animewarrior.jpg)[/spoiler]
Fraction: The Pristine
Main Weapon: Long Sword givin to him upon begin promoted.
Background: Fral was born into a line of 'Royal Soldiers'. A family line that is dedicated to being protectors of The Pristine and everyone that was under their care. Because of it, they are retired at early ages and live in great wealth. The Ingen is one of the most trusted names and almost celebrity status with the civilians and other Royal Soldiers. Fral was already a soldier at 14, became a General at 19, and was promoted to lead The Cleanse, a special ops group, at 21.
Other: He is currently hunting down a mass murderer named "Black Heart" who is a Tainted. He is closing in on the man.[/spoiler]

So_So_Man
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Quote from: So_So_Man on March 27, 2010, 06:08:59 PM
Name: Roger Lastname
Age: 21
Gender: M
Appearance: wears a long, brown coat, goggles, and clothes that are hidden by the coat.  Also, white and about 6 feet tall.
Fraction: 1/4
Main Weapon: A pistol with one magazine left, and a longsword
Background: He used to live in a different universe where he would fly around in airplanes and rebelliously blow up zeppelins, but after a freak airplane accident he wound up in this universe.

Other: Good at fighting, but somehow manages to get beaten up most of the time
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Night
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Quote from: Night the Lucario on March 27, 2010, 07:00:15 PM
Name: Tsunami Wyldfluer(Wild-Flower)

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: His natural skin colour is white, though it tends to be difficult to make out considering the layers of dirt covering the youth. He mostly wears browns and earth-tones, although for festive occasions he can be seen, freshly washed, in a light blue tunic with dark blue, almost black, trousers. Both items have a distinctive wave pattern on them, and his normal clothes are usually covered in embroidery made to look like leaves and flowers. He stands at about five feet six inches.

Fraction: Omex

Main Weapon: He wields a staff carved of heart-of-oak(the heart of an oak tree, and it's strongest part besides it's roots), along with a spear carefully sharpened, that, in the right light, has a vaguely blueish tint.

Background: Abandoned as an infant outside of the city, Tsunami was found, raised, and named by the Omex. Raised to their beliefs, Tsunami all but worships the ground he walks upon, treating every step on solid ground as if it was a gift to be cherished. His staff was gifted to him by the elder, on the day he was told to leave the mountains and to find life elsewhere. He is still unsure why.

Other: Tsunami is more than a little naive, and he's more inclined to get himself badly hurt by saying something stupid than anything else. Of course, as with all naive people, often he has bouts(infrequent though they may be) of sheer ingenuity.
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Chris
[spoiler]
Quote from: AcerChris on March 29, 2010, 03:50:18 PM
Name: Arnestov LuVocnear
Age: 17
Gender: Male

Appearance: His skin color is a darker tan color, and tends to stand of the people in the Northern Land. He also stands taller than most of the people at a height of 6'5.5". He has dark Brown, almost black hair, and has Artic Blue Eyes. He is dressed in a blue and black robe with the Andorian Republic Emblem on it.

Fraction: Other: (Andorian Republic)

Main Weapon: Rare Katana made by his grandfather before the Great Takeover, and these two gloves with rare crystals in him so he can use his Aura power his Katana and his senses to a very high level. (Katana of the Elder Ancestor. Gloves of the Inner Spirit).

Background: Arnestov was born in a wealthy family 10 years before the Great Takeover. He was selected on the calendar of the Alpha Guardian to become a Light Knight. 10 years later, Levarian Thugs came into his home and assassinated his parents and took all the wealth away from him and his parents. He woke up the next morning and was set into a sad/grieving mood because of his parent's assassination. 6 years later, under close watch of The High Priest of the Andorian Republic, Arnestov was then given the two Weapons he possess today. He was given the opportunity to become the White Knight of the Andorian Republic, and he accepted. Along with being the white knight, he was the guardian of the High Chancellor of the Andorian Republic. He made a vow to overtake the Levarian Continental Kingdom, and put a stop to their thugish skeems for good.

Other: Arnestov's attitude phase changed after his parents were murdered. He is know the kind of person who will hunt down the killers for eternity. With his power to convert his aura into usable energy, he can use it as a psychic power to spot the location of his foes. Along with being the white knight of the Andorian Republic, he is also a powerful Auramancer 

EDITED
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Nomad
[spoiler]
Quote from: Modern Nomad on March 30, 2010, 06:30:51 PM
Name: Nethralis Necrethein

Age: 55

Gender: Male

Appearance: Although Old has kept his young appearence do to the overwhelming power of blood that courses through his veins. His hair is long and wavy and he is blond. skin color is pale. He has some muscle and strong legs.

Fraction: The blood users of the northern reaches.

Main Weapon: a basterd sword that sucks his own blood to gain power.

Background: As soon as Nethralis was 6 his parents cast him to train when he was 13 he had earned the right to wield the basic weapon of his people the blood sword's. when he was 18 he was pitted up against his parent's in a battle to the deathhe emerged victorius although he did not kill them he was cast out of his lands and called a cowerd amongst his people so for the last 37 years he has been a wandering sell sword and wold only work alone as to hid what he was to the outside world.
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Hobo
[spoiler]
Quote from: Dr.Hobo2 on March 29, 2010, 06:33:59 PM
Name: Dr. Zigmor
Age: 32
Sex: Once in Guatemala and now it stings when I pee Male
Appearance: A man in a blood stained lab coat and a solid beard on his chin.
Fraction: His own
Main Weapon: A machete
Background: He's a mad man...and a hobo.
Other: He'll cut you open and enhance your body...for a price...and it's not always successful...or in need of your consent.
[/spoiler]

Whatever the EFFFF Allegretto is calling himself
[spoiler]
Quote from: Schemer on March 29, 2010, 03:27:57 PM
Name: Gazille
Age: ?
Gender: M
Appearance: http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazille_Fairy_Tail_chap_119_by_More.png (http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazille_Fairy_Tail_chap_119_by_More.png)
http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazillee.jpg (http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazillee.jpg)

Fraction: Knaughty
Main Weapon: His fists.
Background: Gazille was raised on the streets, eventually he joined Knaughty, he sought after power and after a countless number of cruel and heartless acts later he was granted the power of Dragonslayer abilities. He can eat iron and other metals to restore his stamina and strengthen his body to the durability of it as well. Once he does this ability the part of his body he strengthens appearance changes to Iron scales.



*You didn't answer my text, is this okay Jim*
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Spud
[spoiler]
Quote from: SPUD on March 30, 2010, 06:54:57 PM
Oh hey, leaving this post here. I'll edit in my bio later. D:
EDIT:
Name: Erthlid Suffio
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Has light skin that doesn't see the sun much. Facial features include clean shaven, short nose, and aqua-coloured eyes. He has chestnut brown hair that reaches his shoulders and wears blue linen pants, and a red shirt with a black vest. Not much muscle mass can be seen although he is very agile.
F(r)action: Sudomaki
Main Weapon: Dual wields daggers. Left hand used for parrying and right hand used mainly for attacking.
Background: Was born as what others see as skilled although he sees himself as an average guy. His parents nagged him as a child to train regularly but he ignored them and currently isn't as skilled as he could be. As the nagging increased, he got more aggravated and eventually left home to train at his own pace.
Other: Tends to be lazy and ignore important facts although when he applies himself, he can accomplish great things.

HOORAY FINISHED.
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Grammur Nazi
[spoiler]
Quote from: Light on April 03, 2010, 01:19:39 AM
Name: Harver

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Appearance: You don't know by now? :U Average stature, red hair, blue eyes, caucasian. Wears a black cloak with a red sash, along with black slacks. He also dons a black fedora.

Faction: Preven

Main Weapon: Katana

Background: Harver is a wanderer. Up until now, he has never stayed in one place for more than a few years, usually moving at intervals of six months. Since his parents' deaths when he was 14, he has lived life on his own and has relied on his intelligence and sword to get on by. However, after reaching this new kingdom and the problems that have surfaced within, he has decided to take matters into his own hands, attempt to gain the peoples' trust, and grant them their independence.

Other: He tries to be serious most of the time, but isn't afraid to have a good laugh. He's a bit weary of new people at first, but generally warms up to those who could be friends or allies.))
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Shorti
[spoiler]-_-[/spoiler]
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on March 27, 2010, 06:08:59 PM
Name: Roger Lastname
Age: 21
Gender: M
Appearance: wears a long, brown coat, goggles, and clothes that are hidden by the coat.  Also, white and about 6 feet tall.
Fraction: 1/4
Main Weapon: A pistol with one magazine left (12 bullets in the magazine), and a longsword
Background: He used to live in a different universe where he would fly around in airplanes and rebelliously blow up zeppelins, but after a freak airplane accident he wound up in this universe.

Other: Good at fighting, but somehow manages to get beaten up most of the time
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 27, 2010, 06:20:20 PM
Quote from: So_So_Man on March 27, 2010, 06:08:59 PM
Name: Roger Lastname
Age: 21
Gender: M
Appearance: wears a long, brown coat, goggles, and clothes that are hidden by the coat.  Also, white and about 6 feet tall.
Fraction: 1/4
Main Weapon: A pistol with one magazine left, and a longsword
Background: He used to live in a different universe where he would fly around in airplanes and rebelliously blow up zeppelins, but after a freak airplane accident he wound up in this universe.

Other: Good at fighting, but somehow manages to get beaten up most of the time
That is the most ridiculous thing I have ever seen. I like it =3
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Night the Lucario on March 27, 2010, 07:00:15 PM
Name: Tsunami Wyldfluer(Wild-Flower)

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: His natural skin colour is white, though it tends to be difficult to make out considering the layers of dirt covering the youth. He mostly wears browns and earth-tones, although for festive occasions he can be seen, freshly washed, in a light blue tunic with dark blue, almost black, trousers. Both items have a distinctive wave pattern on them, and his normal clothes are usually covered in embroidery made to look like leaves and flowers. He stands at about five feet six inches.

Fraction: Omex

Main Weapon: He wields a staff carved of heart-of-oak(the heart of an oak tree, and it's strongest part besides it's roots), along with a spearhead carefully sharpened, that, in the right light, has a vaguely blueish tint. When not using the staff as a spear, he wears the spearhead on a string of tendon around his neck.

Background: Abandoned as an infant outside of the city, Tsunami was found, raised, and named by the Omex. Raised to their beliefs, Tsunami all but worships the ground he walks upon, treating every step on solid ground as if it was a gift to be cherished. His staff was gifted to him by the elder, on the day he was told to leave the mountains and to find life elsewhere. He is still unsure why.

Other: Tsunami is more than a little naive, and he's more inclined to get himself badly hurt by saying something stupid than anything else. Of course, as with all naive people, often he has bouts(infrequent though they may be) of sheer ingenuity.

...Is there anything here I need to change, or fix?
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 27, 2010, 07:24:04 PM
Quote from: Night the Lucario on March 27, 2010, 07:00:15 PM
Name: Tsunami Wyldfluer(Wild-Flower)

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Appearance: His natural skin colour is white, though it tends to be difficult to make out considering the layers of dirt covering the youth. He mostly wears browns and earth-tones, although for festive occasions he can be seen, freshly washed, in a light blue tunic with dark blue, almost black, trousers. Both items have a distinctive wave pattern on them, and his normal clothes are usually covered in embroidery made to look like leaves and flowers. He stands at about five feet six inches.

Fraction: Omex

Main Weapon: He wields a staff carved of heart-of-oak(the heart of an oak tree, and it's strongest part besides it's roots), along with a spear carefully sharpened, that, in the right light, has a vaguely blueish tint.

Background: Abandoned as an infant outside of the city, Tsunami was found, raised, and named by the Omex. Raised to their beliefs, Tsunami all but worships the ground he walks upon, treating every step on solid ground as if it was a gift to be cherished. His staff was gifted to him by the elder, on the day he was told to leave the mountains and to find life elsewhere. He is still unsure why.

Other: Tsunami is more than a little naive, and he's more inclined to get himself badly hurt by saying something stupid than anything else. Of course, as with all naive people, often he has bouts(infrequent though they may be) of sheer ingenuity.

...Is there anything here I need to change, or fix?
It's fine. I was hoping you would join after I read your sig  =)
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on March 27, 2010, 07:33:49 PM
hey, NoL, why not make it a staff with an attachable spearhead?
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 29, 2010, 03:09:39 PM
I would like to get 1 or 2 more people before starting this if anyone wants to join on.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Chris8492 on March 29, 2010, 03:16:38 PM
What is this thread about?

I know it's a RP thread but what is it based off of?
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 29, 2010, 03:18:54 PM
Quote from: AcerChris on March 29, 2010, 03:16:38 PM
What is this thread about?

I know it's a RP thread but what is it based off of?
Nothing. Random stuff that fell out of my ears.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Allegretto on March 29, 2010, 03:27:57 PM
Name: Gazille
Age: ?
Gender: M
Appearance: http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazille_Fairy_Tail_chap_119_by_More.png (http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazille_Fairy_Tail_chap_119_by_More.png)
http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazillee.jpg (http://s896.photobucket.com/albums/ac163/Dragonic_F_1/?action=view&current=Gazillee.jpg)

Fraction: Knaughty
Main Weapon: His fists.
Background: Gazille was raised on the streets, eventually he joined Knaughty, he sought after power and after a countless number of cruel and heartless acts later he was granted the power of Dragonslayer abilities. He can eat iron and other metals to restore his stamina and strengthen his body to the durability of it as well. Once he does this ability the part of his body he strengthens appearance changes to Iron scales.



*You didn't answer my text, is this okay Jim*
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Chris8492 on March 29, 2010, 03:50:18 PM
Name: Arnestov LuVocnear
Age: 17
Gender: Male

Appearance: His skin color is a darker tan color, and tends to stand of the people in the Northern Land. He also stands taller than most of the people at a height of 6'5.5". He has dark Brown, almost black hair, and has Artic Blue Eyes. He is dressed in a blue and black robe with the Andorian Republic Emblem on it.

Fraction: Other: (Estonavian)

Main Weapon: Rare Katana made by his grandfather before the Great Takeover, and these two gloves with rare crystals in him so he can use his Aura power his Katana and his senses to a very high level. (Katana of the Elder Ancestor. Gloves of the Inner Spirit).

Background: Arnestov was born in a wealthy family 10 years before the Great Takeover. He was selected on the calendar of the Alpha Guardian to become a Light Knight. 10 years later, Levarian Thugs came into his home and assassinated his parents and took all the wealth away from him and his parents. He woke up the next morning and was set into a sad/grieving mood because of his parent's assassination. 6 years later, under close watch of The High Priest of the Estonavia, Arnestov was then given the two Weapons he possess today. He was given the opportunity to become the White Knight of the Estonavia, and he accepted. Along with being the white knight, he was the guardian of the High Chancellor of the Estonavia. He made a vow to overtake the Levarian Continental Kingdom, and put a stop to their thugish skeems for good.

Other: Arnestov's attitude phase changed after his parents were murdered. He is know the kind of person who will hunt down the killers for eternity. With his power to convert his aura into usable energy, he can use it as a psychic power to spot the location of his foes. Along with being the white knight of the Estonavia, he is also a powerful Auramancer with his ability used on his katana. 

<EDITED THE FRACTION, WEAPONS, AND APPEARANCE>
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 29, 2010, 04:08:47 PM
Quote from: AcerChris on March 29, 2010, 03:50:18 PM
Name: Arnestov LuVocnear
Age: 17
Gender: Male

Appearance: His skin color is a darker tan color, and tends to stand of the people in the Northern Land. He also stands taller than most of the people at a height of 6'5.5". He has dark Brown, almost black hair, and has Artic Blue eyes. He wears jeans with a blue and black sweatshirt. He also has sleek sunglasses that are pitch black.

Fraction: Other: (Umerian Grabarcr)

Main Weapon: Uses a small gun that shoots this Proton Synthesizer Coil (PSC) at it's target. When it hits the target, the atoms in and around the target rapidly change and start to move fast creating a small radioactive field around the target from the decaying Neutrons cause by the rapid growth in Protons and rapid decceleration of electrons, desintergrating it seconds later from dangerous heat. Target faces a slow and painful death.

Background: Was born in an average family with very loving parents. He was the only child and was cherished like a Sapphire jewel by his parents. When he reached the age of 16, going into highschool, his parents went on a trip and faced a terrible trajedy when their private plane was struck by a non authorized, non military, ray that split the aircraft in two. Arnestov then became enraged because he knew who would do the certain act: His evil uncle, who always plotted against his parents. He trained in the arts of Martial Arts, learned how to build weapons and learned extreme battle tactics and techniques. Arnestov is now a Hitman, chasing after his Uncle and currently is involved in the military Special Ops to track down terrorists. Is also a Weaponry scientist and created his weapon the PSC, and is considered one of the most lethal weapons in the world.

Other: Arnestov is the kind of person who if you do something to his close friends or family, he will hunt you down, and kill you in the most pain, and the slowest way possible. He is very emotional about his lose when he was a child and continues to live by that vow for the rest of his life. He is considered a Dark Knight because of his acts of killing and because of his acts engaged to destroy his uncle for good.   
Uh... yeah that's a little bit more tech than I think I let on to have.
A Disintegration Ray
Airplanes
Super Beam

I know I didn't make this in text but this is more medieval. I allowed So_So_Man a gun because it only had one magazine and it was different. This is completely in left field. I hate to say it, but you're going to have to change this a bit. I love how you got into the science of it to justify, but still...
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Chris8492 on March 29, 2010, 04:10:43 PM
Well you said random RP.  :|
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on March 29, 2010, 04:31:00 PM
realized that I should probably specify the amount of bullets in the magazine
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Night the Lucario on March 29, 2010, 04:36:35 PM
Quote from: So_So_Man on March 27, 2010, 07:33:49 PM
hey, NoL, why not make it a staff with an attachable spearhead?

...Actually, this is a good idea. And it works. ...It's also the kind of thing that wouldn't have occurred to me. Oh, and he can wear the spear head as something like an amulet! Yes! It works! I'll fix it momentarily. Thanks, SSM!
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on March 29, 2010, 05:04:25 PM
Quote from: Night the Lucario on March 29, 2010, 04:36:35 PM
...Actually, this is a good idea. And it works. ...It's also the kind of thing that wouldn't have occurred to me. Oh, and he can wear the spear head as something like an amulet! Yes! It works! I'll fix it momentarily. Thanks, SSM!
np, just seemed like the next logical step.  It also seemed a little odd that your character was carrying two walking sticks of varying deadliness
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on March 29, 2010, 06:33:59 PM
Name: Dr. Zigmor
Age: 32
Sex: Once in Guatemala and now it stings when I pee Male
Appearance: A man in a blood stained lab coat and a solid beard on his chin.
Fraction: His own
Main Weapon: A machete
Background: He's a mad man...and a hobo.
Other: He'll cut you open and enhance your body...for a price...and it's not always successful...or in need of your consent.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on March 30, 2010, 06:30:51 PM
Name: Nethralis Necrethein

Age: 55

Gender: Male

Appearance: Although Old has kept his young appearence do to the overwhelming power of blood that courses through his veins. His hair is long and wavy and he is blond. skin color is pale. He has some muscle and strong legs.

Fraction: The blood users of the northern reaches.

Main Weapon: a basterd sword that sucks his own blood to gain power.

Background: As soon as Nethralis was 6 his parents cast him to train when he was 13 he had earned the right to wield the basic weapon of his people the blood sword's. when he was 18 he was pitted up against his parent's in a battle to the deathhe emerged victorius although he did not kill them he was cast out of his lands and called a cowerd amongst his people so for the last 37 years he has been a wandering sell sword and wold only work alone as to hid what he was to the outside world.

Other: This class allows Netralis to take damage and the blood flows around him constantly untill he has some time to use his ability to merg the blood of his enemys with the power of his blood and heal his wounds. Although this seems like a god class the truth is that to much blood lost will kill him instantly if he is not to careful.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Spud on March 30, 2010, 06:54:57 PM
Oh hey, leaving this post here. I'll edit in my bio later. D:
EDIT:
Name: Erthlid Suffio
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Appearance: Has light skin that doesn't see the sun much. Facial features include clean shaven, short nose, and aqua-coloured eyes. He has chestnut brown hair that reaches his shoulders and wears blue linen pants, and a red shirt with a black vest. Not much muscle mass can be seen although he is very agile.
F(r)action: Sudomaki
Main Weapon: Dual wields daggers. Left hand used for parrying and right hand used mainly for attacking.
Background: Was born as what others see as skilled although he sees himself as an average guy. His parents nagged him as a child to train regularly but he ignored them and currently isn't as skilled as he could be. As the nagging increased, he got more aggravated and eventually left home to train at his own pace.
Other: Tends to be lazy and ignore important facts although when he applies himself, he can accomplish great things.

HOORAY FINISHED.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Light on March 30, 2010, 10:39:18 PM
I believe you mean faction as opposed to fraction. :U

Name: Harver

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Appearance: You don't know by now? :U Average stature, red hair, blue eyes, caucasian. Wears a black cloak with a red sash, along with black slacks. He also dons a black fedora.

Faction: Preven

Main Weapon: Katana

Background: Harver is a wanderer. Up until now, he has never stayed in one place for more than a few years, usually moving at intervals of six months. Since his parents' deaths when he was 14, he has lived life on his own and has relied on his intelligence and sword to get on by. However, after reaching this new kingdom and the problems that have surfaced within, he has decided to take matters into his own hands, attempt to gain the peoples' trust, and grant them their independence.

Other: He tries to be serious most of the time, but isn't afraid to have a good laugh. He's a bit weary of new people at first, but generally warms up to those who could be friends or allies.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on March 31, 2010, 07:47:04 PM
Shut up Grammur Nazi  >:(

Also, WE START NOW!!!!!

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Fral walked down a dark alleyway, the sound of armor clanking behind him. A broken down door was taunting him on the left. He put his hand on the hilt of his sword and advanced in at a breezy pace.
Nothing was inside. Alive, that is. A hunk of blood and an assortment of body pieces lay wasted in the corner. The smell was enough to make Fral immediately throw up at the site. He attempted to contain it, but it spilled across the floor quickly. He knew this family.
A young girl with golden pigtails that always had a smile.
A loving father who took care of the girl after his wife passed away. Never a kinder person.
A senile grandfather who always went out of his way to make sure others were happy.
Now, just a pile of flesh. Never to smile at the world again. "Black Heart..." Fral said as a tear fell down his face. The other knights came in and started to search the place, with a group of medics taking care of the bodies the best they could.
"Take care of this mess! And report back to HQ immediately. Find any clues. I'm off to gather witness'," Fral ordered. Without even waiting for a reply, he continued onwards outside of the house. He knew where he was going, and it wasn't for witness'. He was off to see the 'Mad Dr. Zigmor'. This lunatic never had a good reputation, but he was one of the best at getting information from people.
Nothing he did followed protocol, but then again, that wasn't Fral's department.
He arrived at where Dr. Zigmor held his experiments, or surgeries. Whichever made you feel better at night. Fral once again put his hand on his hilt, and kicked the door in. "I'm back, Doctor!"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on March 31, 2010, 08:21:28 PM
           As Nethralis was heading through the country side he saw the Pristine troops heading into a farm house so he decided to go and check it out for himself.

          "Seems like I could find me some work haven't done anything for awhile and cash is kinda short." he said to himself as a reminder of the poor situation he was in
.
            As he approached the farm house he heard a guard yelling and decided that he should hide as to not bring up suspicion with the guards. just then a single guard came out through the door, Nethralis saw this as an opportunity to gain some knowledge on what has happened and also see if there was going to be some mercenaries to hire for this situation. As he followed, the guard stopped at what looked to Nethralis as a research facility. Then all of a sudden he hears the door get kicked in and the guard yelling "I'm back, Doctor!"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Anarchy_Jas on March 31, 2010, 08:50:33 PM
((*Will edit profile in here once I'm not busy stressing over AP crap*))
Title: Re: Crimthon Thkieth
Post by: Night the Lucario on April 01, 2010, 03:55:27 AM
The heavy thound of his thtaff the only companion on hith travelth, Tthunami made hith way thowly to the city on the empty, detholate highway, withhing for nothing more than a companion to talk to.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 02, 2010, 01:51:32 PM
"Ah, hello." He walked in a sort of slithering movement toward Fral. "What will it be? A nose change? Face lift? Or are you looking for a more...mystical enhancement?" He opened a nearby cabinet containing some glowing potions.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 02, 2010, 04:56:09 PM
"Doctor, I am here for more serious matters. I will not play any games. Black Heart."

"His power is strong, even for a Tainted. Have you done anything to him by any chance? Enhance him? I need these answers," Fral ordered him as he watched the doctor go through an assortment of 'things'.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 02, 2010, 05:00:35 PM
"I remember not his name. Of course, I find names trivial to me so he may have come in. All that matters to me is the payment." He closed the cabinet and slinks up right in front of Fral's face. "However, I always remember a face," He says as he pantomimes a picture frame with his hands. "What features did 'Black Heart' have?"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 02, 2010, 05:04:05 PM
"Black hair that covers most of his face. Last time we met him, I slashed him across the chest and by the looks of it, he should have a scar. He is about the same height as me. And his eyes... are eyes that shows the pits of the abyss," Fral told the doctor, not losing any ground as the mad man slunk up right next to him.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 02, 2010, 05:10:32 PM
"Ah yes," A large smile creeped up on his face, "He's one of my best customers. Now, don't get me wrong. I don't work for him because of his power. It's the pay that I want and he always has it. So, as a man of capitalism, I'll do what he needs." He began to walk away and then stopped and looked at Flar for a second. "Oh, by the way, he doesn't have that scar anymore. He got that removed last week."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 02, 2010, 08:06:23 PM
Quote from: Dr.Hobo2 on April 02, 2010, 05:10:32 PM
"Ah yes," A large smile creeped up on his face, "He's one of my best customers. Now, don't get me wrong. I don't work for him because of his power. It's the pay that I want and he always has it. So, as a man of capitalism, I'll do what he needs." He began to walk away and then stopped and looked at Flar for a second. "Oh, by the way, he doesn't have that scar anymore. He got that removed last week."
"Then as a man of capitalism, when is his next appointment, and do you mind if I make mine at the same time?" Flar asked him. This was his chance.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Light on April 03, 2010, 01:19:39 AM
((In case you don't check:

Name: Harver

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Appearance: You don't know by now? :U Average stature, red hair, blue eyes, caucasian. Wears a black cloak with a red sash, along with black slacks. He also dons a black fedora.

Faction: Preven

Main Weapon: Katana

Background: Harver is a wanderer. Up until now, he has never stayed in one place for more than a few years, usually moving at intervals of six months. Since his parents' deaths when he was 14, he has lived life on his own and has relied on his intelligence and sword to get on by. However, after reaching this new kingdom and the problems that have surfaced within, he has decided to take matters into his own hands, attempt to gain the peoples' trust, and grant them their independence.

Other: He tries to be serious most of the time, but isn't afraid to have a good laugh. He's a bit weary of new people at first, but generally warms up to those who could be friends or allies.))
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 03, 2010, 12:13:09 PM
"Well, if you want to meet him then you're in luck." He slinks over to the calendar to double-check. "Yes. He'll be here this afternoon. You can join him...if you can pay the price."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on April 03, 2010, 07:37:09 PM
Nethralis knock's on the door after having listened to the whole conversation. "Man i hope i don't get questioned i would like to get inside so that i can hear more without having to do this stupid trick to hear." He said to himself. (BTW he does this allot)
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 03, 2010, 09:40:12 PM
"Excuse me." He moves Flar to the side and walks over to the door. "Ah, hello. Glad you could come. I've heard you've been having some problem with your grammar." He snakes his way back over to the cabinet and opens it. "I grabbed this tonic from a fellow who calls himself a 'Grammar Nazi.' I can't fathom where he got that name. And he insisted on giving it to me for free." He goes back over to Nethralis with a smile on his face. "Of course, you want it from me and it will cost."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Anarchy_Jas on April 03, 2010, 11:08:21 PM
Name: Jasmine "Jas" Grey

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Appearance: [spoiler](http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ak-ash1/hs434.ash1/24001_1268623235487_1227017716_30635947_8255643_n.jpg)[/spoiler]

Faction: None yet

Main Weapon: A pair of short swords

Background: Jas was born into a wealthy family of the Pristine faction but recently ran away for two reasons; one, she refused to be married to some snotty- and most likely old- man that she didn't even know or love. Two, she refused to be part of the force that's done nothing but abuse their power. The good news is that she is no longer bound by engagement, and can now search for other means of rebellion. Unfortunately, her father's made a new offer: The one who can bring Jas back to (what was) her home has the right to marry her and have some of the family's power. Now she's on the run because of the "bounty" on her head, and looking to overthrow the Pristine.

Other: Jas is quite the feisty daredevil, and always had been. She always seemed scolded for being unladylike during her time living at home. She would sneak out of her parents' manor to explore, and often get into fights. Instead of going to her lessons, she'd ditch them to go watch or join in on soldiers' training. She hates oppression, and has a very independent mindset.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 05, 2010, 09:04:04 PM
((You're good Sh0rti))

"Another of your strange customers? Listen, by the sound of it, Black Heart should be here soon, so why don't you allow me to set-up?"

-

Gurgling echoed through the shanty man's throat as he moved through the town. A dark appearance floated around him as his black hair swayed side to side. An evil man that had his eyes set on one goal. He was back to see the Doctor, and he was ready to try and finish up his upgrades. As he neared the building, he noticed the door was open. He stared hard to see Dr. Zigmor talking with some boy. And inside he saw one of the knights from The Pristine. "I need thi final upgrade," he rasped as he, faster than a normal man's run, closed the gap between building and himself. He charged straight into the back of the boy, and stood looking at Dr. Zigmor and the knight.
"You hould move, or prepare to die, Zigmor,"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on April 06, 2010, 10:43:15 AM
Nethralis gets up and reaches for his weapon as the man enters the room. Then ask's.
"what was that for?"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Chris8492 on April 06, 2010, 11:20:28 AM
Uh magnum, I edited the Faction because the other that i thought i made up was already taken from a movie. -_-

New Faction: Estonavia
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on April 06, 2010, 03:14:12 PM
Awakening from a long night's sleep, Roger stumbled out of his bed in a pile of boxes in an alleyway.  Bored and somewhat hungry, he started his search for something to eat at a nearby building that's door was open.  Curious, he walked inside the building, and found four people standing as if they were about to fight.  After watching for a couple seconds, he asked "Does anyone have something I could eat?"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 06, 2010, 04:58:09 PM
Quote from: Magnum on April 05, 2010, 09:04:04 PM
"You hould move, or prepare to die, Zigmor,"
"But of course," He says as he steps aside and ignoring all the others. Nobody in the kingdom has paid more than Black Heart. "Have a seat and we can finish what we started."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Anarchy_Jas on April 06, 2010, 06:24:57 PM
((Since I'm not exactly sure where to start off here...))

Jas sighed as she trudged through a muddy alleyway. Her boots made a 'squish' noise as she walked, and mud occasionally splattered upwards and onto her, but that wasn't what she found annoying at the moment... It was the body that she was lugging behind her by its ankles. It just kept getting caught on the most random things. "Geeze, this is the second jackass I've had to kick the crap out of today... Is there anyone out there not looking to take me back to that hellhole?" She sighed again, lifting the unconscious man, then dumped him into a cart of hay and started going on her way.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Night the Lucario on April 06, 2010, 08:36:08 PM
Jas stepped out onto the street, just as another man walked out. Seeing her, he shouted, "GET THE WAGON READY!" back into the building he just stepped out from, and charged Jas, readying a blow to knock her unconscious.
---
"What do you mean I can't get in?!" Tsunami yelled at the Sentinel, who refused to open the gates.
"No one is allowed into the city without a passport. You don't have a passport. You can't come in. Go. Away."
(No, I'm not God-Modding here. We're planning this out, Jas and I.)
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Anarchy_Jas on April 06, 2010, 09:07:23 PM
"Now what!?" Jas turned to see the man charging at her, and stepped to the side. She slammed her elbow into his back, smirking. "Tch, just another one of you idiots," she took a fighting stance, with one hand on the hilt of a blade. "Ya'd think you'd be smart enough to at least be sneaky and not such a loud mouth."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Night the Lucario on April 07, 2010, 03:35:58 AM
The man just smiled, and said, "And you would think you'd be smart enough to know a distraction when you see one." Before Jas could ponder what this meant, the heavy blow of a cudgel landed on the back of her head, and she blacked out.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Light on April 07, 2010, 01:39:20 PM
Quote from: Night the Lucario on April 07, 2010, 03:35:58 AM
The man just smiled, and said, "And you would think you'd be smart enough to know a distraction when you see one." Before Jas could ponder what this meant, the heavy blow of a cudgel landed on the back of her head, and she blacked out.
((Hate to interfere here, but I do believe this could qualify as Godmoding.))
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Anarchy_Jas on April 07, 2010, 02:47:27 PM
((I don't remember agreeing to be KOed/playing damsel in distress... And Light, go post in ItE. >.>'))
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 07, 2010, 06:05:29 PM
Quote from: Night the Lucario on April 07, 2010, 03:35:58 AM
The man just smiled, and said, "And you would think you'd be smart enough to know a distraction when you see one." Before Jas could ponder what this meant, the heavy blow of a cudgel landed on the back of her head, and she blacked out.

((I sense some Godmodding in the force. If you're going to do this, tell the person first. We are all 'Not normal' as we are main characters, and we're not so easy as to be knocked out))

Black Heart faced towards the two men, Fral and N(whatevertheintercourse hisnameis). He heard another come up behind him. "I need this last enhancement to be perfect for him. You stand in my way. Die," Black Heart whispered. Before a second passed, he rushed as super speed, punching Flar right in the jaw, knocking him into the roof. Fral let out a rush of air as he fell to the floor, fully knocked out.
Black Heart turned towards N(again,whateverNomadis) and once again charged at him, a strange black aura running from his back coming up towards his arm.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: So_So_Man on April 07, 2010, 06:20:47 PM
((I suppose I should have made it more obvious in the previous post that I the group of people was everyone in the doctor's office))

Somewhat annoyed that they had all annoyed him and kept on fighting, Roger pulled out his longsword to defend himself and walked over to the doctor (or at least that was what he assumed the man's job was, based on the conversation).  Still annoyed, he asked "Hey, doctor, do you have something I could eat?  And whats going on?"
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 07, 2010, 06:57:04 PM
Quote from: So_So_Man on April 07, 2010, 06:20:47 PM
((I suppose I should have made it more obvious in the previous post that I the group of people was everyone in the doctor's office))

Somewhat annoyed that they had all annoyed him and kept on fighting, Roger pulled out his longsword to defend himself and walked over to the doctor (or at least that was what he assumed the man's job was, based on the conversation).  Still annoyed, he asked "Hey, doctor, do you have something I could eat?  And whats going on?"
Quote from: Magnum on April 07, 2010, 06:05:29 PM
((I sense some Godmodding in the force. If you're going to do this, tell the person first. We are all 'Not normal' as we are main characters, and we're not so easy as to be knocked out))

Black Heart faced towards the two men, Fral and N(whatevertheintercourse hisnameis). He heard another come up behind him. "I need this last enhancement to be perfect for him. You stand in my way. Die," Black Heart whispered. Before a second passed, he rushed as super speed, punching Flar right in the jaw, knocking him into the roof. Fral let out a rush of air as he fell to the floor, fully knocked out.
Black Heart turned towards N(again,whateverNomadis) and once again charged at him, a strange black aura running from his back coming up towards his arm.
((I love you too much to forget))
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 07, 2010, 07:15:01 PM
Zigmor had a frown on his face. "No, this won't do at all." He was standing under the two new holes in his lovely roof. "This is going to cost me." He turned around to Roger, angry with all these needless distractions here. "I have no food for you, I'm running a business here, and I'd appreciate it if you'd intercourse  off!" He ran up to Black Heart and grabbed his arm to try and restrain him. "Please, do not strain yourself with these weaklings. Go and sit yourself down in the operating chair and I'll deal with these nuisances." I can't have him destroying the place. I have more important things to use my profit on.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 07, 2010, 09:15:17 PM
Quote from: Dr.Hobo2 on April 07, 2010, 07:15:01 PM
Zigmor had a frown on his face. "No, this won't do at all." He was standing under the two new holes in his lovely roof. "This is going to cost me." He turned around to Roger, angry with all these needless distractions here. "I have no food for you, I'm running a business here, and I'd appreciate it if you'd intercourse  off!" He ran up to Black Heart and grabbed his arm to try and restrain him. "Please, do not strain yourself with these weaklings. Go and sit yourself down in the operating chair and I'll deal with these nuisances." I can't have him destroying the place. I have more important things to use my profit on.
"Of course, Zigmor. After all, I can't have anything happen to you, however," Black Heart told him. He looked up and saw the holes, and knew that was what Zigmor was angry about. "I will pay for all damages. Just allow me to rid you and myself of these pests," Black Heart screeched out. His voice was starting to die out more, due to his upgrades being incomplete.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 07, 2010, 09:19:49 PM
"Ah, thank you." He bows politely and backs away and walks into a small backroom where he keeps all his supplies.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on April 08, 2010, 10:57:30 AM
Nethralis ((this isn't a hard name to remember )) sheathed his sword and grabbed fral, then turned to leave with the heavy as hell knight on his shoulder that was unconscious.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 08, 2010, 11:55:28 AM
Black Heart stared as the coward made his way out. "Good. That was ea..." Black Heart started to say, before his voice went completely. He turned to the doctor and pointed at his throat as he sat down in the operating chair, dropping a wad of cash on the table next to it.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 08, 2010, 05:44:33 PM
Zarroff comes out of the storage room with a blue jar and a syringe. He quickly eyed the cash and smiled showing all his gnarly, disfigured teeth. He leaned over Black Heart and stuck the syringe into the jar and withdrew a large amount. "Just so you know, this one's gonna hurt...a lot!" He stabbed Black Heart in the throat while cackling like a mad man. The entire amount emptied into his throat and Zarroff violently yanked out the syringe and took a breather breath. "Ah...well I hope that will do the trick, but feel free to come in wh-...if you feel the need for more enhancements."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 08, 2010, 06:23:31 PM
Quote from: Dr.Hobo2 on April 08, 2010, 05:44:33 PM
Zarroff comes out of the storage room with a blue jar and a syringe. He quickly eyed the cash and smiled showing all his gnarly, disfigured teeth. He leaned over Black Heart and stuck the syringe into the jar and withdrew a large amount. "Just so you know, this one's gonna hurt...a lot!" He stabbed Black Heart in the throat while cackling like a mad man. The entire amount emptied into his throat and Zarroff violently yanked out the syringe and took a breather breath. "Ah...well I hope that will do the trick, but feel free to come in wh-...if you feel the need for more enhancements."
"Thank you so much, doctor," said the newly upgraded Black Heart. Instead of the crackling voice, he had a strong, young mans voice. "Though Zigmor, you seem to be a man of experimentation. So, what do you think of the opportunity to become more than a regular man? Well, more than any experiments you've done on yourself." He asked the man, a slight red glare rising in his eyes.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 08, 2010, 07:13:58 PM
"Heh, I'll tell you one thing," Said Zigmor as he slinked across the room. "I've had all the enhancements a man could want, and more." He gave a little smirk which twitched as if it wanted to become that wild, ravenous smile again.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Magnum on April 08, 2010, 08:58:29 PM
Quote from: Dr.Hobo2 on April 08, 2010, 07:13:58 PM
"Heh, I'll tell you one thing," Said Zigmor as he slinked across the room. "I've had all the enhancements a man could want, and more." He gave a little smirk which twitched as if it wanted to become that wild, ravenous smile again.
Black Heart let out a disheartening sigh. "To tell you the truth, I have an order from someone WAY higher than you can imagine. I wanted this to be easy. Oh well, we will make you come eventually. Allow me to apologize in advance," Black Heart told him as he opened the door and left the mad house.

-

Fral awoke and saw that he was being carried by a strange man. "Who... are you?"

((BTW, So_So_Man, I will admit I did forget you, but I wanted to go ahead and get this part done ASAP to actually get on with story. Sorry.))
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 09, 2010, 04:51:34 PM
The smile fell of of Zigmor's face. Ah...he DID mean that. He shrugged it off and grabbed his machete. "Well, it's time again to scrounge for bodies." He left the building whistling some off-key tune as he strolled the streets.
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Modern Nomad on April 09, 2010, 09:32:24 PM
"Oh hey I'm Nethralis and I watched as you got defeated by that guy who was just inside there a minute ago."
Title: Re: Crimson Skies
Post by: Dr.Hobo2 on April 27, 2010, 08:57:09 PM
He looked down the alley way in search of any homeless sleeping in his way. Those were generally the people he went after as nobody seemed to miss them much.