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Started by Triforceman22, October 03, 2007, 12:33:08 PM

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Ridley

Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 02:33:51 PM
Quote from: Ridley on October 07, 2007, 11:24:59 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 09:26:02 AM
Quote from: Ridley on October 07, 2007, 07:10:09 AM
How are you going to make chapter 4?

what do you mean?

I mean the only thing you could write about now is the part where Pit flies and that is not much.

Do YOU know where Mario went? :P

I think I saw him fighting with Pit in the co-op update remember?
...Friend codes were probably implemented by the same people who wanted tripping in Brawl...
...It's quite obvious...

Triforceman22

#16
Here's chapter 4.
Enjoy! ;D

Chapter 4 Attack!

Pellet Town

"Oof... My heads-a aching..." Mario grumbled, as he stood up.
Mario was miles away from where he was fighting kirby.
He was hit quite hard, so his sight wasn't good at the time.
He stumbled around, as he tried to keep his footing.

He was in a wide open field. the grassy plains blew in the wind.

Just then, Mario saw a blurry yellow object infront of him.
"Huh?" he said, as he walked over to the thing.
He reached his hand out, and felt the smooth fur on it.

Just then, he felt a burning sensation crawl up his rght arm.
He had just been electrocuted.
"Pika!" the object yelled.

Mario looked up, and saw that the thing infront of him, it was none other than Pikachu.
"Oh, it's-a you," Mario said to the famous Poke'mon.

"Pika!" said the electricity type Poke'mon cheerfully.
"we should find your trainer, and see whats-a going on..." Mario told.
Pikachu nodded, turned around, and started to walk.

Mario was worrying about Zelda, Peach, and Kirby, as he followed the Poke'mon.

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Smash Fields: before the Subspace explosion

"SKRAAAAAA!!!!!" a man yelled, as his blue hilted sword swiped at a green coloured Dinosaur.
the dino dodged the attack, and took his tongue out.
His tongue stretched out, and aimed at the man.

The tongue hit the man's green tunic with not alot of force.
The man looked at the tongue, and then looked at his opponent.
the dino then swallowed the man whole.

As the man bashed around in the his stomach, the green dino then layed a green spotted egg.
seconds later, the man slashed his way out of the egg.
He jumped back, his chainmail covered in slobber.

"Heh...heh... youv'e gotten better since last time...." The man commented.
"But remember this. I, Link will never loose to a dinosaur!!!"
Link drew his sword, and dashed towards his opponent.

Just then, they heard a loud explosion.
The two stopped fighting, and looked around for the cause of the impact.
In the distance, they saw a large black orb of energy, emmit around a small stadium.
They then saw a large ship come near them.

The two kept thier guards up, as the ship hovered over them.
"What the?!" Link said.
Then, the hatch on the bottom opened up, and purple specks rained down.

Primids now surrounded the two contestants.
"Looks like were outnumbered...." Link told the dino.
The green lizard nodded.

A few Primid's arms began to glow red.
Link took out his hero's bow, and strung an arrow.
He fired it at a Primid.

The arrow hit the Primid between the eyes.
In a second, the Primid exploded into tiny purple specks.

"One down, thirty more to go...." Link said to himself.

meh, I didn't really like this one...
well I hope you liked it... :)



QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforceman22

Quote from: Ridley on October 07, 2007, 02:45:07 PM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 02:33:51 PM
Quote from: Ridley on October 07, 2007, 11:24:59 AM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 09:26:02 AM
Quote from: Ridley on October 07, 2007, 07:10:09 AM
How are you going to make chapter 4?

what do you mean?

I mean the only thing you could write about now is the part where Pit flies and that is not much.

Do YOU know where Mario went? :P

I think I saw him fighting with Pit in the co-op update remember?

I'm not following that though....
The plot was made before that was updated....


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Water ☮

still great. the added feeling of mystery  before you introduce a character is great!!  the one thing im kinda disappointed with in the plot is that pikachu isnt wild. i also hope pokemon trainer isnt his trainer

Triforceman22

Quote from: WaterGod on October 07, 2007, 04:09:34 PM
still great. the added feeling of mystery  before you introduce a character is great!!  the one thing im kinda disappointed with in the plot is that pikachu isnt wild. i also hope pokemon trainer isnt his trainer

This is a "Trained" Pikachu. ;)

Also, I havn't played any Poke'mon games.

can anyone tell me what trainers are there?
It would help. :P


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforceman22

Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 06:53:15 PM
Quote from: WaterGod on October 07, 2007, 04:09:34 PM
still great. the added feeling of mystery  before you introduce a character is great!!  the one thing im kinda disappointed with in the plot is that pikachu isnt wild. i also hope pokemon trainer isnt his trainer

This is a "Trained" Pikachu. ;)

Also, I havn't played any Poke'mon games.

can anyone tell me what trainers are there?
It would help. :P

What if I called him Red.
would that dissapoint you? :P


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Water ☮


Triforceman22

Quote from: WaterGod on October 07, 2007, 06:58:45 PM
lets find out ;)

Okay then... :D

Since I got tomorrow off....

(In Canada, we have thanksgiving tomorrow,)

I'll be posting Chap. 5 up tomorrow.
bet you can't wait... :D


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Linkman


Triforceman22



QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Linkman

Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 07:46:09 PM
Quote from: Linkfan71 on October 07, 2007, 07:45:18 PM
wow Epic misplacement 

...What?
Well, im not saying its bad its just that it is a Fan Fic so i thought it should go in the fan fic board.

But i have a halo thread in power on so  :P

Triforce_Luigi

Awesome storyline! I laughed at Link anoucing that he would not be beaten and then getting swallowed whole.

Triforceman22

Quote from: Linkfan71 on October 07, 2007, 07:53:30 PM
Quote from: Triforceman22 on October 07, 2007, 07:46:09 PM
Quote from: Linkfan71 on October 07, 2007, 07:45:18 PM
wow Epic misplacement 

...What?
Well, im not saying its bad its just that it is a Fan Fic so i thought it should go in the fan fic board.

But i have a halo thread in power on so  :P

I like to think of this as the fiction of the Smash boards....

Also, more people will reply to it here.... :P


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforceman22

Here is Chapter 5.
Enjoy! :)

Chapter 5: Getting Involved

The last Primid blew into tiny purple specks.
Their battle lastedfor quite a while, since the sun had already set.
Link sheathed the blue hilted sword, and looked back at the Dinosaur.
"Thanks for having my back Yoshi...." he said.
The Dinosaur smiled back at him.

They saw the ship fly off in the distance.
"I'm going after it..." Link spoke out.
"I need to know what's going on..."
Yoshi nodded.

Link then jumped off the small cliff they were on, and sprinted across the large field below it.
Yoshi turned around, and ran in the other direction.

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Pellet Town: Central Square, Poke' district

Mario and Pikachu finally entered Pellet town.
The houses were lined up around a small fountain located in the middle of the town.
Pikachu guided Mario to a particular house.

"Pika!" Pikachu yelled, as he knocked on the wooden door.
After a few seconds, the door quietly opened.
there stood a boy dresed in wearing jeans, a red shirt, and a red hat.

"Pikachu! I was wondering where you went..." He said softly, as he pet his poke'mon.
The boy then looked up at the famous plumber.
"And you are..?" he asked.

"I'm-a Mario, it's a pleasure to-a meet you!" Mario responded cheerfully.
The boy's eyes widened.
"Your the famous Mario?!" He asked anxiously.
"Yes, it's-a me..." He said.

"I..I can't believe it! I'm your biggest fan!" the boy yelled out happily.
"My name's Red, it's a pleasure to meet you!" he said.

"I was-a wondering, if you wanted to help-a me find-a my friends..." Mario asked.
"Sure, i'll go!" Red replied, "I just need to get some of my other Poke'balls..."
As Red rushed back inside, Pikachu looked at Mario.

"He will-a come in handy..." Mario said to him.
"Pika..." Pikachu sighed.

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Galactic federation building, conference room, Bryyo district

"Samus will go!" Yelled one of the officials.
"Why should we send her?" asked another official.
"She is the strongest of our army!" he replied back.

"ENOUGH!!!" yelled the general.
"This task is for the elite soilders only! Samus is not one of the elite...."
One of the officials stood up, "She is the strongest of us all! She even beat you in hand-to hand combat, maybe thats why you won't promote her..." He said angrily.

"Fine, fine..." the general yelled.
He pressed a button on te desk, which brought up a speaker.
"Samus Aran, please report to the conference room immediatley!"
He said into it.

Seconds later, the doors to the room swung open, and in came a blonde haired woman.
She wore a tight blue suit that covered he whole body except her head. There was a silver blaster
located on her belt.

"Whats the problem?" she asked.
"We have had reports that a mysterious looking ship has been roaming Ninten, leaving destrution wherever it went." the general said.

"So, you want me to check it out huh?" The woman asked.
"Yes. and if you suceed in this, I will personally promote you to the elite squadron."
he said.

A smile cracked on the woman's pale face, "it's about time..." she said with relief, "do I have permission to use my Varia suit?" She asked.
"Yes, I think you will need it..." the general replied.
"Now Go!"

The woman nodded, as she turned around, and headed towards the docking station.

Once she was there, she spotted her orange coloured ship. It's green visor gleamed in the light, as the door to it automatically opened.
"Here we go again....." she said to herself, as she entered the ship.

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I liked this chapter for some reason...
:D
well, I hope you liked it. :)


QuoteRobotnik: GET A LOAD OF THIS!!!!!!!!

Triforceman22

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if so, please post.


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