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Super Smash bros. Rise of the Emissary

Started by Triforceman22, October 03, 2007, 12:33:08 PM

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StarWindWizard7

Dude....







I read all your chapters, and I must personally say that I am hooked.
I swear if your story line ISN'T the way the game IS, I'll be so surprised!

But wouldn't it be awesome if everything you said would be Exactly how the game really was?!

That'd be Crazy!

Anyway, your stories/Chapters are very good, and addicting.

Please, keep up the good work and continue it!
















AND ADD SONIC!!!  :P
   

Triforceman22

Quote from: StarWindWizard7 on October 09, 2007, 08:27:47 AM
Dude....







I read all your chapters, and I must personally say that I am hooked.
I swear if your story line ISN'T the way the game IS, I'll be so surprised!

But wouldn't it be awesome if everything you said would be Exactly how the game really was?!

That'd be Crazy!

Anyway, your stories/Chapters are very good, and addicting.

Please, keep up the good work and continue it!
















AND ADD SONIC!!!  :P

ohhhh....
don't you worry...
Our Blue hero will make his way into this... ;)


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Triforceman22

#32
Here's chapter 6.
Enjoy. :)

Chapter 6, Descent

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Angel land Kingdom,Sky world,

The kingdom of Angel land was not a part of Ninten, it was a floating island that circled the planet daily. The residents who lived there were angels. They watched over the planet, to keep the world from falling apart. It's main city, Sky world was where all the heroes lived.

It has been 20 years since Pit, an elite angel, destroyed the evil Medusa, the godess of darkness.
Pit felt like he wasn't needed anymore.
The angel usually travled to the hall of heroes, where there was a magic cauldron which showed any current threat, that would endanger Ninten.

Pit went there everyday, to see if the world needed his help, but unfortunatley all the problems were already solved.
Until one day....

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Pit sighed, as he looked down at the endless clouds that were under him.
"It's been too long..."  He said to himself.

Just then, he heard a noise coming from the hall of heroes. The sound of an explosion.
Pit's wings widened, as he flew towards the holy building.

Once he got to the entrance, he dashed towards the cauldron, to see if everything was alright.
He finally reached the large room containing the cauldron.
He looked into it, and prepared for the worst.

He saw a small colluseum in the sky.
"What's so bad about that?" Pit asked himself.
Then he looked again.....

A dark orb surrounded the colluseum, and in seconds, it was gone.
Pit had a worried look on his face.
Then, he heard the sound of someone entering the room.

"Who's there?" Pit asked, not bothering to look.
"It's me.." said a femenin voice.
Pit's wings opened, and turned around.
It was Palutena, godess of light.

"My lady...." Pit said softly, as he came to her and knelt before her.
"I have a task for you Pit..." Palutena told him.
"what do you need?" Pit asked.

"I need you to find out whats going on, I have a feeling that ninten is in grave danger."
She said worringly.
"I will leave at once!" Pit said happily.

"Here," Palutena said, as she held out her hand.
a small orb of light appeared in her palm.
And then, the light turned into the shape of a bow.

"You will need this..." Palutena said, as she used her power to make the bow float over to the elite angel.
Pit grabbed the bow. It was gold and blue in colour.
two rings appeared on Pit's right arm.

"Now go!" she said, as she pointed to the portal that lead angels to Ninten.
Pit smiled, as he ran towards the floating stairs.
Once he got to the top, he turned around, and held his arms out.

Then, the wall behind him opened like a door.
Pit closed his eyes, and fell backwards.
as he fell in the clouds, he turned, and soared downwards.

"I will not fail you!" Pit said as he flew towards Ninten.

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I hope you liked it. :)




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Water ☮

yea the 5th chapter was my favorite also! i think im ok with the fact that reds pikachus trainer. chapter 6 was also good. but pit would say "my lady" to palutena

Triforceman22



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Triforceman22

agh, I havn't got the petience to make chapter 7 today, but it'll be up sometime tomorrow, I promise. :)


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Triforceman22

sorry for the "delay.." :P
here's chapter 7.
Enjoy.

Chapter 7, Determination

"We've been walking for hours!" whined Red.
"Where are we going anyways?"

Mario turned to Red.
"You-a know how ninten is-a made up of-a diffrent districts?" He asked.
"Well, yeah.." Red replied.

"What holds-a this planet together, is the power of-a the almighty smash ball."
Mario told, "I have-a feeling that the smash ball has-a something to do with all of this."
He said.

"Well, where is this.. smash thingy?" asked Red.
"They say that the smash ball is-a located in the core of our planet." Mario said,
"but the only way to get through there, is by going to the lylat district.  That's all I-a know."

"Pika!" Shouted Pikachu.
"Right.." Said Red, "we gotta get to this Lylat district."

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Kirby, Peach, and Zelda had walked ino a dense forest.
"Where are we?" asked Peach. Zelda took out her map of ninten.

"It looks like we are in the dream land district." She said.
"Pooooyo!" said Kirby.
"thats right Kirby."said Zeda, "This is your homeland..."

As the trio kept on moving, they heard scufles in the bushes.
Zelda heard thse noises, and her hand started to glow blue.
"I feel a strange energy.." She said, "Stay still."

Then, a giant Spider jumped out of the bush, and lunged for peach.
As Peach shrieked in horror,  she waited for it to be over.
All she heard was a slashing noise.

Peach opened her eyes, only to find the spider, cut in two.
"Was that one of you guys?" asked the confused princess.

Zelda heard something, and looked up into the trees.
There stood a figure on one of the branches.

"Who are you? Show yourself!" zelda demanded.
"Calm down, I am not your enemy." the figure said, as he jumped to the ground.
the figured eyed Kirby, "So, your tied up in all of this mess eh?" the figure asked.

"Who are you?" Asked Zelda.
The figue walked a little closer to he trio.
"You can call me Meta knight."

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Link tried to pursue the ship with all his speed, but to no avail.
Link huffed and puffed, as he took a seat on a nearby rock.

"Aaaargh, i'm not fast enough.." Link complained.
"If only there was some call grass, then I would be able to catch up with him with Epona.."

Link looked around, he could only find a substitute for the call grass.
"Well, it's worth a shot..." Link said, as he put the grass near his mouth.

He whstled into it, and played the song of his horse.
After a while, he saw a figure on the horizon, running towards him.

"Epona!" Cried Link with joy, "Now we can pursue them!"
Link climbed aboared the carrier horse, and off they went.

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Crimean kingdom, Tellius district

"Good job Ike!" yelled Titania, "we probably got 5000 gold by clearing out those bandits."
Ike was the leader of a small mercenary group, that went on an amazing adventure.
They even stopped the war between Daien and Crimea.

It has been two years after that war, and Ike longed for any important news.
After they returned to thier stronghold, Ike wondered about the Black knight.
The black knight was a general in Daien's army. He was also the one who killed Ike's father, Greil.

Ike wanted Revenge, so he made an oath to kill the black knight, to avenge his dead father.

As the sun rose the next day, Ike was going to train with his colleage, and friend, Boyd, when Titania burst into his room.
"Ike, Ike, we have trouble!" Yelled Titania.

"What is it?" Asked the ranger, " Your not going to believe this, but a flying ship is attacking Crimea castle!" She said.

"What?!" said the stunned Ike.
"we have got to get over to Crimea castyle, before it is destroyed!" Yelled titania.

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after a day of traveling, and worrying, Ie and his band finally made it to Crimea castle, well, what was left of crimea castle.

"Oh no!" Ike yelled.
"Look for the survivors! Leave the dead." Ike demanded.

After about 2 hours, they had rounded up all the survivors.
Fortunatley, Queen Elincia was one of them.

"What happened Elincia?" Asked Ike.
"It happened so fast..." Elincia said, shivering.
"A large ship, hovered over my castle, and started firing metal objects at it, and once the metal hit something, it exploded!"

"we need to know who did this." Ike yelled.
"I have a feeling that our world, is in grave dager." Elincia said.
"we need someone to go out into the world, and find out whats going on."

"I'll do it!" Ike said.
"Then it is settled, your ship will be ready in the morning." Elincia said.

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And with that, another lad is involved in what will soon be called the great war of ninten.


Sorry if there are mistakes, I'm quite tired today.
Well, I hope you enjoyed it! :)





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Triforce_Luigi

Pretty good. I liked the air of mystery when you introduced Metaknight.

Triforceman22

Not sure if chapter 8 will be up tomorrow...
you'll just have to wait and see!


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Ridley

...Friend codes were probably implemented by the same people who wanted tripping in Brawl...
...It's quite obvious...

Red


DededeCloneChris


Red

It would be cool if Ike and Pit meet before meeting anyone else. 8)

Triforceman22

Quote from: RedSox on October 16, 2007, 03:52:29 PM
It would be cool if Ike and Pit meet before meeting anyone else. 8)

how did you?!......

:D


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