UH SOMETHING BROKE HANG ON
Started by sorNeotsquerN, January 14, 2014, 09:22:50 PM
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Quote from: Viewtifulboy on February 07, 2014, 08:59:52 AMsorNeotsquerN, you really need to work on your formatting. There are several areas in your post that are missing spacing and punctuation, and you need to separate subjects into paragraphs with some form of transitioning instead of jumping from topic to topic. Take this excerpt, for example:"Gary Wolf said Turner was at home on electronic monitoring because of an unrelated conviction when the murder occurred in the early morning hours of Aug.Built around a main theme that is both proper and respectable and yet can be varied with any number of enthralling nuances, NANNY McPHEE is a thoroughly engaging work."The score was particularly challenging as it was extremely eclectic, encompassing romance, action, and every conceivable type of comedy,"Your sentence seems to imply that a murder was built around a respectable main theme, and that somehow relates to the movie Nanny McPhee (which by the way only needs capitalization for the first letters, not the whole thing).
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